After Watching Grackle Peck a Green Apple Rotted on the Ground
I’m wasting time with the last soul on earth I will ever teach how to piss standing. Older, my take on sentimentality shifts like sunlight that hits objects in a room throughout the day, setting...
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Great mood piece here. I just love: Older, my take on sentimentality shifts like sunlight that hits objects in a room It's such an apt image and so easy to see. And (further along) the way it "sets...
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thanks toni -- think i might change the title some....
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might want A grackle--but I'm guessing you wanted to avoide two "a"s in the title? could make it grackles pural then... to my eye/ear, there's too much page space between S 3-5. It switches from vague...
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thanks Osal -- grumpy or not, i appreciate the feedback yes, that's what i was thinking for the title -- After Watching Grackles Peck Green Apples Rotting on the Ground and no, not intended to be...
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I get that hopeful melancholy!
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I really enjoyed this, Hadley I loved the ambiguity of couplet one and it is just the kind of line/thought that returns to me hours after reading it. I appreciated the surprise finish as well. well...
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H---two poems here, one a nature lyric: I pray apple drunk bees might lift me. When the devil comes, we’ll fend him off with a crabapple barrage like he has never seen.throughout the day, setting fire...
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thanks rose and thanks B. -- which is door #2?
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H--- Older, my take on sentimentality shifts like sunlight that hits objects in a room mid-twitch, dust defining the thinness of air.tease out the poem from these wonderfull three lines.yes,...
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